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Thesis: Compare Contrast

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post thesis statements 

In ONE SENTENCE - tell us what you will be writing your comparison contrast paper about.  I want your thesis statement (not merely your topic but also what  your point will be).  For bonus cool points include  links to any research you have found. Don't forget to add your name. 

 

It might help to read up on how to write comparison contrast essays.  (Click highlighted text to take you to additional resources), 

 

See also how to choose a thesis statement for your essay.  I like the use of the word "choose" rather than "write".  Often we figure out what we want to say well before we can express it in a brief, to-the-point, sentence.

 

 

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 I compare car's and truck's that people use everyday, and use for their daily lives. tanner

 

 Tanner:Good start.  Be more specific and add some details - what kind of cars and trucks (pick ups, SUV's or heavier trucks?  and compact ecomony cars, sedans or what?  What people? - where?

 

Your outline helped me.  I think you want to compare 4x4 pick ups with some sort of car - and I almost get the feeling you could write about how the vehicles function as metaphors for gender.  PU's are male; which cars are female (ecomony, sport, luxury etc.)?

Greg

 

 


 

 i will compare the new 2009 camaro and how its better then [than] the new 2008 dodge challenger.  joaquin ramirez

 

 Joaquin: Better how?  are we talking money (economy or list price), power, the ability to impress the people we want to impress, or what? Greg

 


 

My thesis compares and contrasts the lyrics of Heavy Metal and Old School Rock.                              

-James Chastain

 James: great start.  can you be more specific  yet? Did you say the difference has something to do with narrative vs. theme? One tells a story while another expresses and unfocused emotion. Greg

 

 I did get more specific in my paper, telling about not only lyrics but also the artists, loudness, and timing of the song.

 


In my essay I want to talk about diversity competency. I want to compare Middle East Culture and American Culture. Jamshid

Jamshid: this sounds very interesting.  I like it.  Be more specific.  What about culture are you going to compare?  We talked about religion - and how ceremonies, food, and family values all may be efffects of or aspects of larger religious impact on culture.  Greg

 

 


Although most people think hurricanes are more powerful than tornadoes, they really don't know until they've seen the wind speeds, number of deaths caused and the power they bring to earth.  (Josh)

 

Hurricanes/ typhoons happen on a larger scale (? what do we mean by scale) and get all the press.  Do we need evidence that "Most people think" that? Do people confuse danger and power? Or damage in terms of money and power? Greg 

 

 
 I’m comparing the way women and men communicate
 Ali: can you be more specific?  verbal or non-verbal?  if verbal then what direction are you going in? In what way are they different? You may want to write teh rough draft first - look at your examples and from that describe the kind of difference you notice. Greg
1. How females and males are raised effects how they communicate with each other 2.verbal.  also its fine that you crossed my top quote out because i would have crossed it too.  
 
 Despite recent publicity, women have overcome many obstacles and are currently equal to men. (Sam Hinkle)
You have a point of view - that's great.   This is too broad though.  Focus on one part of your outline (either appearance, friendship, or stereotypes) and develop that.  Go into detail.
Equal in what way?  Opportunity, Financial sucess?  Political power? What?  Greg
 
The 2007 Dodge Charger SRT 8 is a better car than the 2007 Pontiac GTO. Fernando
Better how?  In what way? you may want to look at Joaquin's Thesis statement and my comments to him.

 

 

Middle School basketball is more about education than High School Basketball.  Terrance

Not bad.  Might be able to be even more specific.  GD 

 

 

 

 


 

 

Remember: Outline is due Tuesday, 10-29-07 (35 points).  Two full page rough draft is due 11-1-07 (35 points), and a final draft is due 11-08-07 (130 points)

 

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